The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
With the development of transportation and economy, traveling all over the country or all over the world is not a rare experience for most of people. Take myself for example, I have a lot of experience travel in summer vacation both in a group led by a tour guide and alone. Through my own trip experience, I strongly recommend everyone should travel in a group because following reasons.
On the one hand, travel with a group of people provide us chances to get acquainted with new fellows and build strong relationship with them. Because most of time in your life, you hardly have opportunity to spend a long time with so many strangers. By contrast, if you choose to take a trip by yourself, you will find aloneness accompanying with you through the whole trip. For instance, last winter vacation, I took a trip to Shanghai by my own, and at first I planned a week tourism but I just spent three days in the vacation because it was so boring that I couldn't talk about my feelings or comments about the spot and scenery with others.
On the other hand, traveling with a tour guide full of understanding about spots and local culture offer you useful knowledge, because tour guides always provide extra information about the place that improve the quality of a trip. Without those professional tour guide, you will miss so much interesting experience in the trip. Take myself for example, I used to travel in a group in Wuhan, and the tour guide share local history in World War II and local culture all through the trip which expand my horizon a lot. Thus, tour guide can always make your memory about trip be unforgettable.
To conclude, group travel led by a tour guide with rich experience benefit us a lot which not only let us make new friends but also improve our traveling quality that there's no reason to travel alone any more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61890243902 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57513326789 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515243902439 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0269794824 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224741877891 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944985864815 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786888665518 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165641766193 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783981464423 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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