the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
Hectic life forces people to work a lot every day. They prefer to overcome their stress by traveling during their vacations so it is really important for them to make a journey in a convenient condition. There also have been two contrasting attitudes toward this, while some believe that traveling in a group with a tour is a unique experience, others adhere to the idea that traveling individuals help them to discover unknown areas and landscapes. To some extent, I support the former perspective. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
To begin with, traveling based on the guidance of a leader help travelers to save their time and money. Leaders usually have special plans for people and they consider all aspects of a desirable travel so they suggest the best thing during this time. To shed light on this matter, I want to bring up an example of an activity in which I was involved. Two years ago I decided to go to a foreign country alone. I had many difficulties during this journey such as buying plane ticket and reserving a hotel. I did not know a lot about the facilities of hotels for passengers so I lost much money by selecting an inconvenient hotel which do not have any services for visiting the city landscape. This example aptly illuminates that how important and beneficial it is to travel with an expert tour.
Another equally noteworthy point to be mentioned is that when we travel with an accomplished group we can promote our knowledge about the place where we want to go. Since, tour guides have enough experience about different places we can visit new cities or country in the view of a professional person so we learn a lot during this period. For instance, The Asian society for foreign traveler declares that, 70 percent of people who go to the historical countries with a tour get more information about their cultures, foods, clothes and historical structures based on the knowledge and skill of tour guide.
In brief, based on the aforementioned reasons one can logically draw the conclusions that by traveling with a tour people can save their money and time, furthermore, they have an unforgettable chance to increase their information about the destination city.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, so, while, for instance, in brief, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83684210526 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76876623824 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9356266046 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182282461386 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543487211337 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540071022335 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110523908138 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266063366605 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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