The best way for you to prepare for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young.
Some people say that deciding what I do in the future early is not always better than not. If you are pressured to choose a specific way in the future, you cannot consider many factors such as your character, strength, environment and so on. Thus, you might decide your future job without any serious considering. However, even though you spend more time to find what you want to be or what you do better, you might not find your future job that fit you. I think that planning carefully when you are young is better way for you to prepare for a good future for several reasons.
First of all, if you make a plan for your future when you are young, you can save more time to prepare for your future than others. Thus, it really helps you reach to your goal. In my cases, I can start to do for my career more quickly than others. When I’m in a middle school, I decided to major in education. When I’m in a high school, I didn’t spend much time to which major I will study. It helps me focus on my studies better. After entering a university, I had a time that I thought about my future, of course. However, I could not wander aimlessly due to my plan for the future. It brings me a sense of stability and confidence.
Furthermore, the efforts to make a plan for the future make me not lazy. It makes me love my life and cherish myself. Even though the plan that I made when I was young will change, I think that it’s also valuable to only do the efforts to make a plan. It helps me reflect on my life. Eventually, making a plan for the future can help you live a better life. For example, my father always makes a plan for him when he was young. Despite he didn’t decide his future job when he was young, he always a plan about what he will do in short future. It makes him work hard so he could make enough money in a good house with his family including me.
To sum up, I think that the best way for you to prepare for a good future is to plan carefully when you are young. It can help you save the time that you can spend to make your goal. Moreover, it can be your motivation to be diligent and keep up to your goal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, i think, in short, of course, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1175059952 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16078457692 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410071942446 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8554166006 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.68 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.68 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549718553959 0.236089414692 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171280428769 0.076458572812 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226243836339 0.0737576698707 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394411193689 0.150856017488 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108878206422 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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