cars play an important role in society
I strongly agree that in twenty-one century cars play an important role in society. No one can deny that in twenty years ago there be fewer cars in use and today everything change and use of cars not only increase because of a growth in population but also it has a direct connection with our lifestyle.
For these reasons, I would like to provide supporting evidence for my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
One of my primary reason is that increase in the rate of population and I think have an enormous effect on the use of cars, and obviously change in the requirements of people made an effective influence on the lifestyle of them. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was a little girl I remember that we all the time use of public vehicles for transportation and there were not so crowed, but today when I use public transportation like bus or metro I spend a hard time in this vehicles.
You see, with the growing population use of public transportation is not so comfortable and peoples prefer to use of their own car.
Another reason which deserved some words here is about change in the lifestyle of people. Today, peoples are so lazy and they want to do every daily task in easy ways. Moreover, using different machines for works have a critical role in the lifestyle of people and consequently made them so passive even in movement from one place to another place.
For what has been discussed above I strongly believe that use of cars rises and may rise more in the future. Because with the development of technology everything will be changing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66552901024 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73797576987 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.257093035 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154249215863 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646475770323 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123711570731 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758623345093 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953303072856 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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