Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
Automobiles
Bicycles
Airplanes
By the advent of technology, This world has gradually grown a lot and many things also have been changed throughout the period of the time. Moreover, Technology has improved various sides of our society whether it be the quality of human being, Economy, Communication and especially It has a great impact on Transportation as well. Nowadays there are many types of vehicles invented and developed for serving convenience to us such as Airplane, Train, Car and so on. However, I think that Automobile is the vehicle that can alter the majority of people in this world for some reasons which will be explained in this essay.
First of all, Car is one of the most prevalent and affordable vehicles. As you can see that more than half of the people are using this vehicle and Nowadays, It becomes the most common one that is around you. Because It makes our traveling matter much easier than in the past. So, We don’t have to walk by our feet to go somewhere or use the animal as your vehicle anymore. By using the automobile can save our vulnerable time and reach any destinations faster. And Now it is available for everyone. As a result, it can boost up the growth of our society in many ways like doing some jobs, for example, some online market delivering some parcels by using a car and furthermore we can go to anywhere in this world as we wish by sitting in the car.
On the other hand, Everything has both the positive side and negative side. Similarly to the car, It doesn’t only give your convenience and comfort. But It also has some side effects of using it and has a great impact on our lives. By a number of cars which used by many people in this world are continually increasing and In some countries has a lot of traffic congestions. As you know that an automobile needs the fuel for moving and while it is consuming its fuel, It also emits Carbon dioxide or the dark smoke from its exhausted pipe. This smoke is totally harmful to our society, for example, It could ruin our health if we are in the area of bustling cities because this pollution can lead some illness if we inhale this smoke too much like lung cancer asthma and so on. As a result, Many people living in the city will suffer from these serious diseases. The worst one is that it will increase the death toll by the pollution that comes from using this vehicle.
To sum up, Automobile has been widely used and It has influenced our lives a lot whether it be commutation or the growth of our society but It also poses a threat to us at the same time like the pollution which is one of the most dangerous threats of this world as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the most common one that is around you. Because It makes our traveling matter much easi...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...th the positive side and negative side. Similarly to the car, It doesn't only give y...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...angerous threats of this world as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, i think, such as, you know, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46680497925 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47251815297 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2071791808 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.65 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120835543888 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405038814571 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455534233924 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746501399054 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356025205614 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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