A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
As the growth of industrial have been increasing over a period since the crucial historical event which everyone may know is industrial revolution in England. Nowadays,It has been ubiquitous in some developing and developed countries and It has tremendously influenced in many countries’ infrastructure such as economy ,transportation, and education. However, It is expanding more widely and rapidly. In some areas which are rural or outskirt are also threatened as well. It has a great deal of effects to people in there which I reckon that It has both advantage and disadvantage
Which I will elaborate reasons in this essay.
First of all ,If we have a new large factory ,of course I will provide many opportunities for people in there like occupation. The majority of people are normally looking for some jobs that offer high salary. But it’s not everyone working in there. It becomes higher competitive chance. So,They have to compete and struggle with others to get that job. As a result, I will lead to hurt their relationship and confliction in them as well. For example ,When my dad and his friends heard of new manufacture factory nearby their village, But It limited the people who will work in there. So my dad is one of them who in that factory but not his friends ,then all of his friends were envy him and broke up with him after all.
Secondly, Having these factories can accelerate the growth of development in the areas and consequently,It will provide more facilities and more security in town as well. On the other hand, It takes many areas to build them which possibly is forest area. It is another way to reduce the natural resources and ultimately ,it will have no trees to absorb the pollution which comes from those factories and I will be more and more increasing,So Its impact affects to atmosphere as well.
For instance, In some hometown nearby my own, having few factories, are fraught with smoke which emitted from them. People in there wear the mask to protect them from these harmful gas And Their atmosphere is horrible. All trees are dried because having too much pollution. So many people are gradually moving out of there because of this reason.
To sum up, I believe that building a large factory has both pros and cons effect to people,whether it be the job that offered by the factory,having more facilities and faster growth of improvement in the town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, after all, as to, for example, for instance, i reckon, of course, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86618004866 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82157048419 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7593224566 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4761904762 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806539012869 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222210195821 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282574365671 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443485155188 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215523567476 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.