The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
Every period in people`s lives has own beauty, but there are periods which we like more. One period which is one of the best according to me are the college years. I agree with this statement that the college years are the best time in a person`s life because in this period of life people are young, healthier and do not have big problems such as an adult has.
First of all, the young people do everything easier than adults because they are full of life, they have a lot of energy and everything is more interesting in this period. In addition, in the college years, you can travel more, go to the parties and have fun. Furthermore, in this period people have more time for themselves because they do not have a lot of obligations although assignments and exams, while adults need to look for the family and also have a lot of obligations at work. How you become older the obligations get bigger.
As a second, the college years help people to improve their social skills. We are learning to communicate with people more efficiently. Also, we meet a lot of people all over the country even from other countries. For instance, in the college years I met people from different parts of the world who have very different cultures and this was very beautiful experience because I learned about their traditions and tasted their traditional foods.
Finally, the most beautiful part of the college years is that there are a lot of activities you can do. For instance, I was in a hiking club and almost every weekend we went to different places. Also in the summer period we went to one place where we made a camp. I think that people through these activities can learn a lot of things and experience the life.
In conclusion, there are a lot of things which can be a mention about that the college years are the best time in a person`s life. But the most important is that people improve their social skills, learn to be responsible and to make decisions, also to enjoy new activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61452513966 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57282434526 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45530726257 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6701132 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234337058291 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847836320271 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106782110444 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146505222841 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084174132454 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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