Consider a situation where you are asked by your supervisor to work with one of your co-workers on a project. This co-worker has opinions that are very different than yours and they feel very strongly about these opinions. Do you think this is a good idea? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different ways to do a task and everybody likes one of them. This is the best part of our life that we can look in a diverse fashion to the issues and finally reach the gaols in diverse methods. While some people feel that it is better to work with some colleage who they are similar in thinking, others, like me, disagree. I feel this way for two reasons, which I delve into in the following essay.
First, working with people with different mindset will help you to know more option to find the soultions, speciallly when you work with determined person who are enthusiastic to contemplate about tasks. This porvides co-workers a fresh and critical environment which will increase the productivity and the efficiency of work. For example, I worked in the pharmacy at the hospital two years ago. In the Interavenous compounding clean room, there was some new instruments and aparatuse which only some people knew who to work with. At first, I would not eager to use them to do some routin assignments, until our manager assaigned one of my senior clleague to work on a projects with me. He insisted to use the new equipment to work faster, since I was not familiar, I did not want, but my friend urge to use them. Finally, not only did I figured out how to work with them, but also we did our task easier and more efficient.
Second, working in a fixed and stablished way for a long time will be boring. In each condition, changes can bring some new fresh air to work environement, and all employees need this alternatives to stay positive and energetic in the workplaces. My sister's experience is an interesting and convincing example in this regard. She has worked as a teacher in elementary school for several years. She tlod me that every years her boss put a couple of teachers in a group to work together for one week. She recalled those experiences as very exciting challenges for all teachers. Because they were used to work in vast manners, this practice helped them to know their solleagues better and amke a better relationship. Moreover, they learned new teaching styles from each other. She was a very enthusiastic person to work with others who accept her at fiest, but these yearly working with other teachers improved her thinking style.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that working with other so-worker who are determined to do a project in a specific way can be a good chance to look at the tasks in different manners, which provide you more information and experiences. In addition, this is a good way to make a bettter relationship with your colleagues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7032967033 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69859861569 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525274725275 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6952942583 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6818181818 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247937003741 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687963135321 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495129204115 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156976952828 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420235084412 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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