By and large, in this rapidly growing world the concept of education is being a more importance ones. because of the value that ones have to hers or him future and having knowledge that it can by very better by good education. A question, which is a matter of debate, a controversial one, when the education was easier some people says that in past because they spend so much time on cell phone. Online games todays. Although it is a little hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I am to a great extent, on the belief that i personally disagree with this opinion. there are several reasons that two of them are in below.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that justify the thesis is that children can learn much more when there not be stress on them. To put it in general words, in now a days life, we all are well known that life are more difficult than past because of more task that every one should do.in this situation the children are affected. if there be a way for release this stress from them, absolutely the can perform better and efficient. there have been many research's that shows some games can do this and also placing them before work or studding in morning have very beneficials.by this way, they feel more relax and be so enthusiasm about learning because they do what they want before learning.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above they can learn from this kind of things that some thinks they make problems for learning is another point which requires meticulous attention. it is true in some situations if the parent do not control their child's, they can not only waste their time, but also couldn't have concentration on learning. However, nowadays, there are so many kind of learning that provides by social networks and on cell phones. for examples, for learning some courses, if the children have problems or misunderstand them, they can ask their questions from their finds on web sites or by phone that these were not in past. going in depth, nowadays all knows the influence of practicing in grope with others that have some commons with us, then we can find them in some social networks.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule.to recapitulate the reasons, todays by this ways, not only they can solve the stress issues and be more proper for better performance, but also they can learn from other on web sites or some social networks like Telegram.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, in general, kind of, by and large, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69724770642 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39413948636 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497706422018 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5981824411 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282363529937 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923182640369 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839711061568 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169134271652 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415569090716 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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