Describe some of the problems overpopulation causes and suggest som solutions
In today’s modern life, thanks to advanced medical breakthroughs, the number of deaths, contributing to over population, has been lowered. overpopulation is one of the most controversial issues in every society. two questions that arise from this fact are what challenges it has made and how we can tackle them. although it is slightly hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I personally adhere to the fact that quite a few problems are caused by overpopulation, among which lessening the quality of life and unemployment are two of the most crucial ones which need a meticulous attention. The following paragraphs will elaborate more on this issue.
To commence, it is incontrovertibly axiomatic that residents living in overcrowded societies do not benefit from social welfare as efficiently as those who are residing in less crowded cities. generally speaking, they encounter limitation in numerous of sectors such as housing, hospitals, and shopping centers, to name but a handful. In public hospitals, for instance, individuals have to wait for prolonged hours unless they go to private hospitals having shorter waiting lists. In spite of high prices of private hospitals, people prefer to go there rather than public ones. To delve more into it, observing sanitation and lack of contagious diseases as well as better medical services are the most beneficial points which drawn public attention to private healthcare centers. Another challenging problem is unemployment. In fact, the competition rate to attend lucrative careers in overpopulated societies are is so high that only skilled labor and highly-qualified experts can achieve rewarding jobs.
In order to surmounting the aforementioned problems and reaching population control stabilization, government should implement measures. In fact, crowded households should be obliged by authorities to control childbearing by means of free contraceptive tools along with participating in “population- control” training classes. As a case in point, In India, government has paved the way for people to have make a contribution in controlling population by providing free, convenient, and accessible amenities to control childbearing. On the other hand, high taxes or even fines should be imposed by governments, as preventative interventions, for families who have more than three children. although what I mentioned above might not be generalizable to the whole context. For instance, in the Netherland, being average public age in 60, families are encouraged by authorities to bear more babies.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions excluded from general rule, I believe that overpopulation not only worsen the quality of life, but it also limits job prospects. As a result, imposing fine _ as punishment_ for crowded families and providing free population control tools can be two of considerable solutions to outweigh overpopulation problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64508928571 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3411491975 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9589509912 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.45 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862272331197 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254192050955 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363882597478 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584169626007 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423002003142 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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