Do you agree or desagree with the following statement
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
No one can deny that are both positives and negatives aspects of how we live today, and the impact of this way of life will have on future generations. If I was forced to choose, I would definitely say that are more positives impacts rather than negative, for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin, nowadays, our society is searching a lot in so many ways to have a better future, to control de use of water, the global warming, in with this searches and ideas, I’m certain that me can have a better environment and even a better life style in the future. I have to admit that my opinion is based on my personal experience, when I was a child, my school, often realize some kind of activity involving the future of our planet and environment, based on my own experience, I believe that our current way of life will benefit the next generations.
Secondly, nowadays we care so much on our future, to realize our dream , and even make a family, that we really think twice before do something that will have a negative impact in the future generations. I also can mentioned a personal experience related to this opinion, when I was younger, when I have some trash in my hand, I wait until I saw a trash can, to throw it out. I was used to do this, because I always thought about the future, and how ugly will be for my sons, to say a lot of trash in the streets, parks, mountains, etc.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I really think that our currently way of life, will have more positive impact rather than negative ones in the future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to doing'.
Suggestion: used to doing
...saw a trash can, to throw it out. I was used to do this, because I always thought about th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egative ones in the future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, secondly, so, as for, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44107744108 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63015544605 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501683501684 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6718929244 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.875 100.406767564 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.125 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309083202353 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147901733338 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962790618975 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216905413837 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595296714047 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 11.7677419355 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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