Do you agree or disagree because economic growth is most important modern societies, we should not slow down growth by the concerns of environment, support with relevant examples.
The development of economic growth has put a lot of pressure on the earth's resources, environment, people and society at large. The damage that is already done does not seem reversible. Hence, I beg to disagree that because economic growth is most important to modern societies, we should not slow down growth by concerns of the environment. In what follows, this essay will explore a few points that can help explain the reasons behind my stand.
To begin with, the content and utilization of natural resources play a significant factor in economic growth. Once we end up depleting the majority of the resources for the sake of presently benefiting the economy and leave nothing for our future generation; they will have to survive in a world suffering from an unstable economy. For example, the extent of various mineral ores as iron or oil reserves determines a country's capability to achieve economic growth, as these are vital raw materials required by a majority of business establishments in any nation. Once these are all depleted, the businesses will have to face hurdles or have to import these raw materials at a much higher cost from other nations.
Secondly, the balance in the co-existence between humans and wildlife gets interfered when natural habitats are being cleared for the demand of open spaces for modernization. This would have an adverse effect on society when endangered species would become extinct forever. Let's take an example of the situation that arose in the area of Sundarbans when some part of the forest was cleared for agriculture. The nearby settlement was attacked by a white tiger who had lost his habitat. Not only did it injure the people around, badly enough, but also the villagers had to shoot that endangered animal to save their own lives.
Last but not least, in recent years, researches have shown how the use of alternate sources of energy can be beneficial to us, both economically and environmentally. It is just about a little time and patience that the traditional machinery can be replaced with the new ones running on alternate energy. For example, a study undertaken by the State University of Arizona showed that in areas where pumping of water and generation of electricity have had been achieved by the use of windmills, could cut down their costs on expensive filters and precipitators. In fact, the amount thus saved, was invested in the educational sector to take students to field trips.
To conclude, it is time that we seriously consider implementing sustainable development. Only in this way, we can not only save the Earth from further damage but also prevent the upcoming generation from facing an economic turmoil.
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also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03355704698 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81534535925 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8722804646 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.421052632 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5263157895 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199695596458 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596636969668 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121667901354 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109594222495 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118749801177 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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