Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Parents teach their children good morals and raise them with the quality so that they grow virtuous enough to lead a life on their own. Unlike some individuals, I do agree that it is a better situation when young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. In what follows, this essay will explore a few points to help explain my stand.
To begin with, young adults who start living away from their families early in their lifetime, start learning to take responsibility on their own much faster. Instead, the ones who end up spending a long time with their families find it much difficult to analyse situations without the help of any guardian and stumble in taking decisions on their own. Let's take the example of my friend here. When he finally decided to move out for his second job to live in a different city, he had to call his parents for every choice he needed to make, even when it came to buying vegetables from the market. Not only this proved his incompetency in his personal and professional life but also it proved to be too much of a pressure to his aged parents.
Secondly, starting to live early away from parents can result in going through unexpected hard times and hence, initially, in quite a few failures to deal with. Yet, it is to be remembered that failure is not opposite to success but rather a road to success. For instance, one can never learn how to ride a bicycle without falling a few times. Parents can only help by giving a push at the beginning, but one must learn from the mistakes made earlier and paddle the way though.
Last but not least, by the age when children have turned into young adults, they are quite capable to chase their own dreams and choosing their way of life. And therefore, it is often better to avoid any sort of collision that may happen when their parents end up making a decision that is not in accordance with their children. Let's take an example from the movie Dead Poet's Society. Neil Perry was obviously influenced by Keating's ideas. But he had to bury his choices under the expectations of his teachers and his father. Unable to face Mr Perry, Neil gave up his life, only to keep his dreams unfulfilled.
Families will always be there to support one another, no matter whether young individuals start living alone, early or not. But to let the young adults get the feel of real-life and its hurdles is significant in terms of letting them develop certain capabilities such as tolerance, patience and resilience. The early they start, the faster they will mature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63296703297 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.426682175 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556043956044 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8751011273 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.380952381 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281370405398 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790711486627 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987493052633 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159861617464 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07870441526 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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