Everyone can solve their life's important problems by themselves or with the help of their family. Often Government's help is unnecessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Problems such as a misunderstanding or a rift due to difference in opinion among colleagues can be solved at a personal level. Whereas confusing regarding the spilt of property between two siblings can still be somewhat solved with the help of one's family. Yet, there are critical issues that we face where neither our resources nor our expertise is enough to bring up a solution and only the government's help can prove useful. Hence, I beg to differ that everyone can solve their life's important problems by themselves or with the help of their families with the government's help. In what follows, I will note down a few points that can help explain the reasons behind my stand.
To begin with, individuals may require financial help from the government at times when even their families are not capable of providing adequate monetary support. Educational schemes, scholarships and free vaccinations can help young talents shine in future. For example, in the state of West Bengal, the introduction of giving free textbooks and gifting bicycle to poor girls, lead to increase in the number of female students attending schools in rural areas. Also, the free of cost polio drop given to all children in our country has significantly eradicated the disease.
Secondly, it is significant for the government to intervene and provide support for the well being of refugees from other countries. As these families lose their original settlements and relocate without much resources such as food or money or clothes, they require the help of the government to attain optimal stability. For instance, statistics taken last year from a middle easter country show that in areas where government scrutiny was weak, refugees were illegally forced into prostitution to earn their basic livelihood.
Last but not least, families living in critical zones such as near the border of the nation which is susceptible to wars or terrorist attacks, areas which are prone to be affected by natural disasters etc., need security and support of infrastructure from the government. An individual and his family cannot solely be responsible for providing such kind of support to each other. Let's take the example of the situation where some parts of the state of Kerala was submerged under floodwater. Had the government denied to send medical aid and arranged for transportation facilities, that could have resulted in a humongous mortality rate.
To conclude, no matter how rich or resources a person is, it can always be hard to cope up with situations as mentioned above without the support of the concerned government. Therefore, it is futile to say that often the government's help is un-necessary in solving important life problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gues can be solved at a personal level. Whereas confusing regarding the spilt of proper...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ill be somewhat solved with the help of ones family. Yet, there are critical issues ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ccinations can help young talents shine in future. For example, in the state of West Beng...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...iginal settlements and relocate without much resources such as food or money or clot...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ing such kind of support to each other. Lets take the example of the situation where...
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Line 7, column 511, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied sending'.
Suggestion: denied sending
...ed under floodwater. Had the government denied to send medical aid and arranged for transporta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14189189189 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84748378523 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599099099099 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9408733645 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358896708056 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112251392858 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153126260629 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186516654562 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130266607377 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.