Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information, Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The usage of the Internet has become quite a household thing because of its efficiency to provide us with unlimited informational resources. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. In what follows, this essay will explore a few points to help explain that, in fact, access to so much information creates problems.
To begin with, too much personal information about any individual interferes with one's privacy. And once the information is online, it is not a piece of cake to remove the content and avoid the controversies related to it. For instance, when an ex-boyfriend of Kim Kardashian allegedly posted a video capturing their intimate moments online, it did not just become trending, but it took an entire lawsuit and good amount of money to pull the video down from the internet.
Secondly, when applications can access information such as the current location of a person, it may threaten even national security. For example, in the 26/11 attack, terrorists had gained locations of the targetted security professionals at the hotel of Taj with the help of a fake retail website. Targets not only had shared their locations but also the terrorists ended up learning more crucial details by analysing Target's search content and monitoring the exact timings of their activities in those applications.
Last but not least, people tend to self diagnose themselves through information obtained from the internet. Often individuals wrongly address their symptoms; Neither the internet has the expertise of a doctor. According to the research conducted by Indian Institute of Medical science last year, about thirty per cent of pregnant women badly injured their reproductive organs while performing abortion by their own, with the help of the instructions that they gained from the internet. Further, around eight per cent had died before they could reach the hospital due to excessive bleeding.
To conclude, there are always two sides to a coin. Internet acts as a boon by providing us with lots of valuable information in the field of education, news, the stock market status etc.. But as discussed above, when an excess of information is out for the public, there are high chances of that these data can be manipulated by unethical users, creating serious threats to both life and society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16710182768 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79312113536 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613577023499 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9763017491 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6875 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27301719474 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095590152006 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109359691725 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155595286583 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109996406353 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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