Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Owing to the energetic and jubilant nature of young people, it mostly seems that they happen to cherish all aspects of life more than older people. They are at the age where they can attend clubs, hang out with their friends, travel without any health restrictions, etc.. Yet, I certainly disagree with the statement that younger people enjoy life more than older people do. In what follows, this essay will explore a few points to help explain my stand.
To begin with, the young people of this generation are busy running a race of cut-throat competition. Whereas, since the phase of undergoing hardships is over, older ones mostly get to enjoy their retired life. Let me share my household experience here. It's been two years since my father's retirement. At this age, he's being able to enjoy his life like never before, doing things he always wanted to do, such as going for longer and blissful holidays with acquaintances of same age group, reading novels, etc.. Quite unlike me, where I end up most of my time, chasing my office deadlines.
Secondly, older people have the opportunity to depend on their children or grandchildren for their needs. And if not on their children, older people can count their days in old age home which are responsible for taking complete care. Younger people not only have to be responsible for themselves but also has to consider looking after their aged family members, which might be too much to handle, at times. For example, older parents are always prioritized by their grown-up children, In case of any emergency or rather for even daily needs, old parents can relay on their children to help them with the situation. Such as older parents rely on their younger generation for bringing them medicines.
Last but not least, older people have less to worry since they have already left their toiling past behind. Let's say for instance that, there's no need for older people to worry about earning money because most of them can exploit their savings or pension or allowances from their children. Additionally, a study done by the University of Arizona a few years back, shows that when people were divided into groups of two- the older and the younger ones, the former group agreed to be in contempt with a simpler and less demanding lifestyle than their later counterpart.
Though it is not possible to deny the fact that older people are most prone to health problems, yet younger ones are not at all free from such sufferings. Moreover, as we start to age, human beings tend to realize it more that happiness comes from inner peace and tranquillity of mind, unlike young ones who invest quite a lot of time in chasing materialistic pleasures. Hence, that is why I believe that older people can enjoy life to its fullest form.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8179916318 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40849500714 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562761506276 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3394860373 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7619047619 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313129391116 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103083149809 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136676961213 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190899663304 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897519239531 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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