do you agree or disagree with the following satetement? parents today are more involved in theis childrens education than were parents in the past. Use specifice reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, education has been one of the critical things that indicate a person's success. When it comes to this point, people have debated as to whether today's parents are more involved in their children's education or they were in the past. Personally, I agree with the first group and it what follows, tow reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my standpoint is that nowadays education has great importance among modern societies and education is as important as playing for children. Nowadays people should have a great academic degree to be a successful person and to have a secure job and good social class. Additionally in the past people were able to work without studying Therefore, they studied if they want. My grandfather had a great job in the bank without studying a lot. Accordingly, their parents did not put much effort into my grandfather's education because they knew that he could find a good job without studying.
another reason is that in the past, the vast majority of humanity could not study at all because the only high social levels were allowed to study. For instance, farmer's children could not study and they should merely work.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that nowadays children are very related to their parents and they are not autonomous at all. So their parents should pay more attention to children to achieve their goal. For instance, when I was a child I was very independent and I did my homework with myself and my parents were not aware of my education. In contrast, my brother was not on his own and my parents should pay more attention to his education and were more involve in his education.
To sum up, based on all argumentation stated above, I think that parents are more relatively involve in their children's education than in the past because nowadays people should have an important degree to be successful and to have a satisfying career in the future. Besides children are more connected to their parents emotionally in all facets of their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...a satisfying career in the future. Besides children are more connected to their pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09550561798 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40731610732 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6469088395 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228059619794 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825002773707 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611875385091 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136723572871 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566119370917 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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