Do you agree or disagree with the folowing statement?
people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries
In this progresive and sophisticated world, hobbiy and spending leisure time is one of the most central needs of modern human which should be noticed in order to imrove the quality of life. Among hobbies, Traveling is very crutial and enjoable for the people in the world. When it comes to this point, people have some debates whether people should travel into their country or it is better to visit another countries. Personally, I agree with the first group and in what follows, two reasons will be discussed to shed ligh on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to sustantiate my stand point is that if people try to visit their country, It will be enormously beneficial for the county economy. In other words, when people travel inside the country, Their income would be exist in the country and this issue help to triving economy. In the trip people inside the country not only giving their money to their compatriat but also help to improve local economy. Therefore the good economy can affect very ones life.
Another equaly noteworthy raeson corroborating my stance is that each country has it's culture. If people travel into country, They will be familiar with their ancient tradition which construct the base of their culture. My personal experince is a compelling example of this. The last year Me and my husband decide to travel to the east of Iran which have enrich history. After traveling to the Sistan, we saw a lot of senic archiac gardens and buldings that had a special architecture. In addition, now i have a better notion about the Sistanian customes.
Last but not least, trip inside the country is cheaper that going abroad. Also,not only It dos not need a lot of money and it is more economic but also dose not need a lot of schedual. People can go to the trip every time they want without any long-time planning and without any cash.
To sum up besed on all argumentation stated above,also goig abroad has a lot of merits, It's better to travel inside your country because it can help the economy and you don't need a lot of money or time.
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...because it can help the economy and you dont need a lot of money or time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70027247956 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39838363456 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5478305357 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223497138248 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700585192748 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595881567659 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124221032174 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386380977106 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.