Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
In this sophistigated and progressive world, leisures are crucial needs of human being which should be noticed in order to improve the quality of life. With this in mind, traveling has an important role in order to decreasing the stress of modern human. When it comes to this point, people have some debates whether it is better to travel in a group led by a tour guid or travel alone. I agree with the first group and in what follows, two resons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that travelling in a group makes our trip schedule better. In other word, Tour guid is the manager which handles and plans the trip. In addition, administrater would be careful about expenses; moreover, the finacial issues be blured in the trip and people have the chiper and more enjoyable trip.
Secondly, traveling in a group is enormously beneficial to find an appropriate society. During the trip, people can be familiar with each other and this kind of relationship is very worthwhile. My experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, I was in a domestic trip that I found a rewarding friend who is my husband now and we love each other.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that Tour guids are very profesional and they are familiar with ancient places, local natures and different cultures that if we travel alone, we will not find such places. Moreover, they can satisfy our desire with coveying essential information about the hostory of ancient places.
To sum up, baced on all argumentation stated above, traveling with a group would be wothwhile because finding new freinds and knowing more about the archeic places have a graet impact on our mind and also we can handle our trip better. I hope that people be more familiar with traveling by domestic tours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82407407407 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.602675499 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1273653873 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159222302162 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617190686892 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507498284892 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927453538447 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407370986417 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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