Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.
In modern days, advertisement is one of the most important ways to affect decision of people but not in any realm of life. Even though many people the unhealthy eating habits among people attributed to advertisement; but, I, personally, subscribed to this idea that advertisement has a very minor role in the eating habits of people. Habits of human beings shape in the routed of many factors as following, family education, each individual perspective, and condition of their lives.
In first place, human beings are significantly influenced by the behavior of their parents. As all we know, psychologically speaking, most Humans' characteristics and habits shape during their childhood. It is hard for everyone to change such characteristics and habits like eating habits, formed in their minds from yeas before, are as a part of their personalities. For example, my sister used to be a bank employee with long working time as her husband. They didn’t have enough time to prepare healthy food for their children who were always eating fast foods as their meal. Though they are adults and have enough time to eating healthy home foods; but they are in habit of those unhealthy foods and can change their way.
Secondly, each individual has a valuable blessing, wisdom. This blessing enabled them to think about every matter in their lives and compare the pros and cons of them. Advertising related to food is one of these matters. These days, all the people have enough knowledge to manage their eating habits. I think the people who eat unhealthy advertised food, behave in similar way without such advertisement, the only effect of advertisement for them will just be going from on unhealthy food to another. In fact, they aren’t care about their health, so this perspective of them, it isn’t matter to care about our healthy, is the cause of their unhealthy eating habits not more. For instance, my friend is a person who doesn’t matter to her healthy and body shape, is lazy. Two year before, a restaurant was built around his neighborhood. After a while, she started order food from that restaurant occasionally, but it didn’t pass long time that she was eating there every day. Her laziness and not being care about her health make her a person with unhealthy eating habit.
In sum, I think the advertisement isn’t the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits at all. The eating habits in people arise from their childhood lives, perspective, and the condition of their lives.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06407322654 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81758883126 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496567505721 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4140170997 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2173913043 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290242613995 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106187532986 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159365267627 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309299080375 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.347506833195 0.0645574589148 538% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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