Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays it is common for some countries that the students take a gap year after graduating high school. Some people think it is a waste of time, but in my opinion, students should have a break after a continuous education. I feel this way for two main reasons.
First of all, it is an opportunity for students to know and understand themselves better. University is like an endless road that a year off helps students to prepare for what is coming. My relative's experience is a compelling example of this. My cousin was really stressed and worried about attending university right away. So, she traveled to many counties with her family after she graduated. She mentioned that she joined a volunteering club while exploring. After she came from abroad, she felt totally like a different person, and her attitude and tendency had changed greatly. As a result, she forgot all of her anxieties and was accepted to the university she was planning to apply for.
Secondly, some universities are too expensive that students cannot afford the tuition fee. In my country, the average salary for the month is not enough to even provide everyday necessities. So, a gap year is a great chance for students of poor families, who can pay their tuition, by working on part-time jobs and accumulating their salary.
On top of that, some universities' requirements for applying are too high that students need to work on particularly, their personal statement essays better. In order to write it better, students should spend plenty of time. On average, writing a good essay that will impress the admission committee takes four to five months. There are also other factors that students need to consider, such as social activity. Many countries do not have many volunteering activities which are really important for students. Because the most famous schools accept students who have social activities and academic achievements.
In conclusion, taking a year off is beneficial for students, Because, in this duration, students can be ready for university, some poor family students would have the capability to pay their fee, and also they can improve their other characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0756302521 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81850070178 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0380836468 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165371987924 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509331869795 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417416568024 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975568384139 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253960780246 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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