Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Relationships play a really important role in every individual's life. I personally subscribe to the theory that being honest is the most important characteristic of a person whom one's in a relationship with. In the following paragraphs, I will illustrate my point of view.
First and foremost, people who always tell the truth can help one to become a better version of themselves. People normally tend to view themselves as something they're not so having an honest friend or partner around can really help one to see themselves for they truly are. I remember a couple of years ago, I decided to attend a writing contest in Dubai and I decided to tell my friends about it. I always thought that I was able to write in a mesmerizing way that holds the readers' attention, So I asked my friends to read my essay and give me their opinion about it. They told me that the essay wasn't developed well and they had difficulty keeping up with it. Therefore, I spent a lot of time practicing in order to enhance my writing skills and ended up winning the contest. If my friends hadn't been honest with me, I would have never been able to win the competition.
In addition, Lying in a relationship can lead to trust issues, which can really harm one's mental health and stability. Liars, often tell the people they're in a relationship with, things they want to hear, and this can create an addictive bond between the two of them. Furthermore, in the case of most people, when they finally realize that they've been lied to, they start lying to themselves and keep denying the fact that the other person is a liar and refuse to break up because the addictive relationship has caused them to believe that they might not find someone again. This can go on for long periods of time, but when they finally come to the realization that they can't continue living this lie anymore, they find themselves trust broken and they start to feel like they can't trust anyone anymore and this consequently affects their current and future relationships with other people. For instance, my friend used to be in a relationship with a liar. I kept reminding her of the warning signs but she was so head over heels in love with him, that even the thought of breaking up with him made her sick to her bones, but when she finally took the initiative and broke up with him, she found out that she lost herself in the process of trying to avoid losing him. She started to doubt everyone and everything around her, she kept pushing everyone away and accusing them of being liars. It took nearly a year and several therapy sessions for her to put herself back together and start trusting people again. If my friend's partner would have been honest with her, none of this would have ever happened.
It's my firm conviction, that being honest all of the time is the most vital consideration in any form of relationship because an honest person is always nice to be around and to rely on, plus being in a relationship with an honest person can prevent the formation of trust issues and it's horrible consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6029143898 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55134629529 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493624772313 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1062423367 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.35 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.45 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141485764563 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502806490388 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427640276785 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101062317294 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272640879862 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.