Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that telling the truth is the most significant factor in any relationship between people. Truth builds mutual trust between people, which makes life is possible. Lies do not reach a limit; it is like fire diminishes everything in its way. Also, being honest raises our value in others' eyes, and respect is readily attained.
First of all, being honest builds a bridge of trust between both sides of any relationship. Trust is not gained quickly, as people take time to reach this in the link. When we get to know somebody, we try to show the right side of our personality. And the best way to maintain this relationship is to be yourself from day one. On the other hand, when people explore new correlations and find dishonesty, they immediately depart. No one can afford to be in affiliation with a fake person. For instance, a few years ago, in the first year of college, I met a girl in my history class. She seemed to be kind and decent, so I encouraged myself to make her my body. After only two weeks, I discovered that every single piece of information she mentioned about herself or her family was entirely fake. I was shocked and decided to end our friendship as I felt very uncomfortable. I thought that every time she opens her mouth would be granted as a lie, and I could not trust her any more to be my companion.
Secondly, Lies can not be controlled. It is like fire eats everything in its way. When people make a lie, they do not stop, and they keep lying more to cover-up their fake stories. Thus it is like an incurable disease that people try to avoid. For example, When I was a child, I lied to my mom about my grades, then I thought it is just one small lie that is not going to heart anybody. But it turned out that I had to keep telling lies to answer all my mother's question related to my grades. It was uncontrollable situations, and I felt It would not stop. I ended up telling my mother the truth, to get rid of these piles of lies. If I had been honest in the first place, I would not have suffered that much.
In conclusion, I think people should emphasize their honesty when they are in a relationship with others as this is excellent maintenance to the link and also the only way to have a healthy relationship with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46117647059 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58329367831 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522352941176 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8240142921 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.84 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144155188176 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421404896492 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749254152211 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111347848137 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644307386133 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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