Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping into conclusions. After all, each and every question and topic requires careful deliberation in that there are many variables to the truth. Even though some people may adamantly believe that the best method to relax and alleviate stress merely is to spend time with other people around us, I firmly believe that such an opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, I think that the most efficient way to relax and comfort ourselves from stress entirely is by spending time alone.
First and foremost, The majority of people may agree with the notion that we are surrounded by different kinds of people all the time. We spend most of our daily time with other people like our family when we are home. Even if we are outside, we still deal with co-workers or colleagues. When we have time to relax, we need to change the flow of our life, and one of the features is to be alone. Being surrounded by people all the time is stressful, and we need to reverse this effect by being sole.
To illustrate thoroughly on this, I am a wife and a mother of four, at the same time, a full-time worker. Hence, I am always around people, and being alone is not accessible. I feel too stressed every morning, as I feel pressure from everyone around me. At home, my kids keep asking me for help. Then at work, I need to fulfill my work's tasks. Consequently, when I have free time to spend, I opt to be alone. Sometimes I like to lock myself in my room and lie down on bed doing nothing. I feel that is the only thing that makes me comfortable after being squished by others. If I had not had a few minutes to stay alone, I would not have had the energy to keep going to the next day.
On top of this, being alone allows us to reflect on ourselves'deed, and also, we could enjoy the activity that we perform. Whenever we are with others, we try to make them comfortable by fulfilling our duties, but when we are alone, we try to satisfy ourselves. The only time that we can practice our hobbies is to be alone, especially if no one around us shares the same preference. For example, my young sister Lucy is a successful pediatrician. She has a heavy work schedule daily. Whenever she has time away from work, she goes fishing. Fishing for her is the only hobby that makes her relax. When I ask to join her on a fishing trip, she says no. The main reason behind this, she only enjoys fishing when she is by herself. Whenever she accompany anyone, fishing does not engender the relaxing effect that she is used to anymore.
In conclusion, yes, it is virtually impossible to answer an open-ended question, and the jury may be out on this given essay. Still, I beleive that being alone is the most successful way to relax away from any stress. As people always surround us, and also, we can practice and enjoy our hobbies solely than with others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accompanies'.
Suggestion: accompanies
...ng when she is by herself. Whenever she accompany anyone, fishing does not engender the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, still, then, after all, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2419.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 547.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42230347349 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41162629058 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484460694698 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.51792114695 370% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5836216459 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0322580645 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6451612903 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83870967742 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145407534698 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038944396241 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403302157372 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903610149352 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292895603834 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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