Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
As modern life keeps developing, traveling has been more attainable than before. In my opinion, I believe that traveling abroad is more useful than internal trips. Traveling abroad enrich our knowledge, and decrease life's dullness
First of all, traveling to different countries broadens our knowledge. AS we are visiting new destinations, we will explore other cultures and gain information about them. This will help us to know what is out there. For instance, a few years ago, my family had the chance to receive good offers for trips with a professional company. The company offered us internal and external trips to select. After a long discussion, we chose to visit France. We entirely enjoyed our trip to France. The two weeks trip was completely useful as we know nothing about the french culture. After the trip, my son acquired a lot of information about France. When He had to work on a project about other cultures. He covered the project efficiently. As a result of, his life experience about the foreign country.
Secondly, we travel looking for a change to alleviate life's routine. Therefore, we need to go to different places other than the country we lived entire life. We will try different lifestyles to eliminate the boredom we encounter daily. For example, My sister visited Thailand two years ago. She enjoyed her adventure a lot , as she tried the authentic Thai food, and she had an elephant ride. When she came,she was delighted for exploring new experiences. Being in different places other than the ones she used to inspired her and flourished her soul.
Finally, visiting foreign countries is cost effective if we traveled off season. People always chose the wrong time to visit foreign places. for example, When we went to our honeymoon we were smart enough to go in the fall. The trip was very successful because the cost dropped drastically. If we had traveled in summer, we would have paid almost triple.
In conclusion, I believe that traveling outside our country is beneficial than internal traveling because it broadens our knowledge outside our territory, and provides a healthy change to our routine. All we need is to select the right season.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...anaged to efficiently cover the project.As he already had a life experience about ...
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Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anaged to efficiently cover the project.As he already had a life experience about ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...or a change to alleviate lifes routine. Therefore we need to go to different places other...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75703324808 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67118133759 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524296675192 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9332930826 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5384615385 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0384615385 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125903123395 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414406392487 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607493879817 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101280597924 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569271151348 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.