Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of considering the truth is the most important factor in any relationship. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree that truth is the most essential point in any relationship between people. It is my firm believe that only by truth any relationship can be maintained harmoniously for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, One of the reasons for my specific opinions is that truth is the most important factor for doing better in any job. The top factor to build believe between boss and subordinate is the truth. Without truth the relationship between boss and subordinate cannot be built properly. Because the higher rank officer only believe the lower rank officer due to their truthfulness. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. You see, I remember a story on the news that illustrated my point quite well. Three years ago one of my friends joined in a multinational company. He was very honest and truthful person from the childhood. He performed all of his official task from his heart and very honestly. After six month of his joining time he got triple promotion in his carrier and he told me that It was only possible for his truthfulness. Because his relationship with boss was very strong and it only was possible for his truthful attitude with his boss. If my friend had not been truthful person, he would have never got a huge promotion from his office. For this reason, we can say that telling truth is the most important factor in any relationship.
Secondly, why I illustrate my specific opinion is that speaking truth is very important to build relationship between teachers and students. Because if the students do not fully believe the teachers lecture and accept these as truth , the proper education is not fully disseminate among the students. Drawing from my own experience, I had heard of a story similar to the one I shared in my response. It is ten years ago when I was the student in high school, one of my friend went to foreign country with his family and admitted in a school. In that school he always spoke the truth with his friends and teacher. The all of the teacher gradually believed him and he was selected as president of student councilor and all of the fund of student welfare was kept to him. The relationship with teachers and students only was possible due to his truthful attitude. If he had not been a truthful person, he would never has got such precious position in the school. So, it is certainly clear to see why truth is the most important criteria to make relationship between people.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that truth is the most important aspect to build up relationship between people. This is because the truth is the most important factor for doing better in any job and speaking truth is very important to build relationships between teachers and students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, second, secondly, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76691729323 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753661547 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407894736842 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0073359265 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9259259259 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7037037037 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03703703704 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240871561923 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860026965792 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811117688065 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191153346225 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423412390181 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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