Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

Some people state that always telling the truth is the most important element in relationship because relationship between people is build on trust and that we can not trust someone telling lies or being trusted telling lies. The beliefs might seem perfect but it is actually a bit impractical in the real world. In some situations, we should also take people's feelings and the consequences after telling the truth into consideration.

For instance, in the work office, assume your boss did a wrong dicision and fail to earn any money from the investment this year. As the result, the boss cut everyone's salary to compensate the loss of the company. Obviously, your boss surely did an awful thing and make everyone being punished with him but it would be inappropriate to point that out and criticize him or her, even though that's a truth. If you did so, although you might be honest about the desaster, the consequence might be losing your job instantly. The best way to deal with this probably is to not say anything and work as usual.

Sometimes, we also need to consider other's feelings, especially for the closest one's. For example, when someone really close, like a really good friend, ask you about how you think about his or her essay that he or she put a lot of efforts in. Even if the article is far from good, it would be mean to say something negative or critical. You would hurt his or her feelings and he or she might not talk to you anymore if you choose to tell him or her the truth. In this case, complete honesty could cause your friend to suffer or even leads to end of friendship.

Futhermore, though it might be extreme, there are some situations that prohibit people from telling the truth. Tech company, for example apple, would make their employees to sign a paper about promise to protect the intellectual propperties of the company. The press are alway curious about these unrevail secrets of apple and do all they can do to fetch news from apple's employees. If the employees of apple answer to the press and told anything about the unrelease products of the company they would not only lose their jobs but also face several lawsuits. And facing apple in the court would be hell.

It is true that we need to tell the truth to build relationship with people. However, in some situation, complete honesty could hurt people's feelings or cause irrevocable consequences. It is better to think twice whether it is accepted by others before telling the truth.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'tell'.
Suggestion: tell
...trust and that we can not trust someone telling lies or being trusted telling lies. The...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...t and criticize him or her, even though thats a truth. If you did so, although you mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, for example, for instance, it is true, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71853546911 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49372277715 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514874141876 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5592356526 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1904761905 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20692076871 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055497492856 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674079878453 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117180218337 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498832994317 0.0645574589148 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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