Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For a long time, cars has been part of our everyday life. Many people use cars for transportation. They drive to school or drive to work by daily basis. And because the population on earth is still growing speedily, the needs for cars could be at a much higher level in the next twenty years. That is why, in my opinion, there should be more cars on the roads in the foreseeing future.
Although there are mass transportation services in the city, which could possibly reduce number of the cars in use in some places, there are still many places where metro system or bus can not reach, especially in the suburban area. Additionally, the growing population not only happens in the country but also in the city. that cause more needs for living place and consequently brings the rent price to a higher place. And unacceptable rent price force more and more people moving from the city to the suburban area. Without the supports of the downtown subway system, they need to buy a car for transportation. As long as the problems exist, there are going to be more people driving.
The relatively lower car price also help the trend. car makers, like Toyota, are work their best to reduce the cost by introducing automatic production, which means produce cars by robots. The prevalent use of robots make the car price being at a lower price compare with the price twenty years before. As more people can afford the price of a car, more cars would be sold. In fact, over twenty million cars were sold last year and still growing at a steady speed.
Moreover, autopilot systems were being developed and embedded in cars. In the next twenty years, the self drive mode would be installed in most of the cars being sold. Driving on roads will be much easier and safer than today. Even those who do not drive would want to buy a car and let the car drive by itself.
The number of cars in use will probably not be fewer but more than today due to reasons above. Although, we do not know exactly what things may happen in the future, many market analysis support the statement that there will be more demand of cars for sure. And what might also interest us is that how many car sale will increase in twenty years?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: could
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Suggestion: That
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Suggestion: Car
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, still, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27375790268 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5025 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0215490422 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.347826087 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269542111789 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848378643011 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755818954506 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169715146022 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857175404102 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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