Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there might be some people who contend that the most important ability in the modern society is one’s professional knowledge. However, in my opinion, it is for you people to have ability to plan and organize becase even if you have plenty of knowledge about some subject, without planning ability you cannot make it as a practical result in time. Also, ability to organize the short term tasks of that work is essentail, because almost every work should be done with others and so it is divided into a lot of small tasks.
To begin with, planning ability is essential to make a result and finish some work on time when the result is most needed. it would be useless if it is not finished on time even though the result is excellent. I observed this many times. For example, in my company we are working on project to develop a software or a system, and every project has its due date. one of my coworker who develop navigation system, he delayed his project since he failed to plan his tasks. During he delayed his project the competitor release new navigation system which already had the feature that he was working on. Consequently, the competitor made a greate hit and our comany lost many of our customers.
Moreover, most of people cooperate with others in the contemporary society because there are a lot of works that cannot accomplished by one individual, so it is essential to orginize the works that were done by others. These days, there are a lot of working methodologies that define the efficient ways to cooperate with others. For example, ‘Agile methodology for developing software’ is very popular nowadays and many global companies compel their workers to learn and apply that methodology on their works. I think this example strongly refer the essential need of organizing ability in this society.
To sum up, in this society the ability to plan and organize is essential because it is necessary to make a practical result on time and cooperate with others. In this regard, I can assuredly say that young generation should learn and develop the ability to plan and organize their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83287671233 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65474504103 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476712328767 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2616975322 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187741718046 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614429209808 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565142718194 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129950498425 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555588874382 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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