Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is indeed undeniable that making plans and being organized is of paramount importance in our lives. Although it is convenient to have a schedule for everyday life, some youngsters do not like to make plans and do their chores based on occurrence. People often divided by the idea either today because of complexity of life, it is crucial for young people to be organized or not. Regarding this controversial issue, I believe nowadays young people should have the ability of being organized because of today's hectic life.
On this account, being organized will help young people to have concentration. One of the hurdles which people might face if they do not have the ability to make plans for their lives is the stress and anxiety of doing the works incompletely. According to a psychological research conducted in the United States in 2013, people who always make plans for everyday of their lives have more concentration on their jobs and employees who do not have an organized plan for everyday, always are stressed and cannot concentrate on their jobs. It demonstrates that the ability to plan is important especially in today's complex life.
Likewise, these days because of hectic life people do not have time to do other activities. Having the ability to plan and organize not only will help people to do their jobs better, but also will help them to have time for other activities like spending time with their family, traveling, sports and studying. Take my own experience as an example, two months ago I was studying for an important exam for my graduate studies. I did not make plans for studying for that exam. I was so busy doing my works and I studied when I was free. Finally, I could not pass the exam. It indicates how planning can help us to be successful in our significant tasks.
Having taken all of the reasons that are mentioned into account, I tend to go along with the idea that it is vital for young people to have the ability to plan and organize to have a better life. No one can deny the fact that by making plans people will be able to do all of their works with more concentration. It is hoped that by educating children to be organized they will have a convenient life in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... 2013, people who always make plans for everyday of their lives have more concentration ...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s who do not have an organized plan for everyday, always are stressed and cannot concent...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...in our significant tasks. Having taken all of the reasons that are mentioned into account...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64467005076 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60729457551 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446700507614 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3109486446 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296460926445 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114900028687 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689933446417 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219428501722 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228550845535 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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