Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the modern era, the life has became more and more comlex. It could be a significant challenge for many people. Some people believe that modern life does’t need any plan and organization but in my opinion, have a paln and organization forcontricating life is essential. In next paragraphs I will elaborate my reasons.
The first exquisite rason to be mentioned is; saving more time. People don’t palnning their times without any plan, because many elements and factros envolve them and they loss many of oppurtiunities. Having a comperhensive plan not only is indisputable but also, could arrange people life and make programable their works. Planning in daily life save more time and reduce people waste time. Hence, planning could incrase people efficiency. My own experience is a complete parablein this case. When I was a college student, I was working coincide. I was at university half a day and I was going to my job place quickly, in addtition, I had other controversial issues such english class, sport club etc. I design a plan and and wrote a schadule that cover my weekly times. My plan was a flexible idea that gave me more time during the week, whit this plan I could fulfill my master degree with the highest point among other classmates.
The second reason that is substantial is; reducnig your cost. If you have a noticable plan, you could reduce your extra cost and save more money, even you could organize economical aspect of your life forceful. Whithout any plan or vision, you don’t give to your aims, owing to many of goals need a financial support with exact design. Many of investor who bring their money to a project, before every works they praper planning documents. Investor believe that complexity and unforcastable situation of life and economic need a organiation structure and alternative options. The recent study that drived from London Economic and Society Institute, depicted that at least 75percent of people and investor that have a complicated life have a bluprint; plus, more than 90 percent of them are proper person with low cost. Therefore, this institute has provided a instruction for Britanian to reduce cost and more saving money. Finally, In my view the economic effect of life organization encouragement people to planning for life, don’t imagine you it is a exaggerate.
In short, based on ofermentioned; even though, some people don’t belive a planning and organizing life. In my viewpoint, organization complex life is a basic action and it is neccasry as a food for body. I have two reasons that disclose this matter, one is saving people times and give them extra times; two, it is reduce people cost and give them more money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
In the modern era, the life has became more and more comlex. It could be a sig...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...class, sport club etc. I design a plan and and wrote a schadule that cover my weekly t...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the highest'.
Suggestion: the highest
...could fulfill my master degree with the highest point among other classmates. The s...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...hey praper planning documents. Investor believe that complexity and unforcastable situa...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le situation of life and economic need a organiation structure and alternative o...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce cost and more saving money. Finally, In my view the economic effect of life o...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...is a basic action and it is neccasry as a food for body. I have two reasons that disc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, at least, in short, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18241758242 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94637824953 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551648351648 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.446492098 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.52173913 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227804014964 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070395132883 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485725848268 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153524222354 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423894478438 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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