Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is indisputable that the world is changing so quickly. This would affect people in many aspects of their lives. Two of these aspects are Happiness and satisfaction. They are the main axis and core of one’s life. Personally, I believe that people are less happy and less satisfied than people were in the past. I feel this way for two main reasons that will be further explored in the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, the world is changing at a pace that acquires us to keep up with, otherwise, we will be far behind the others. In other words, the competition to be the best result in a society that is too busy to stop for a while and enjoy life. From nowadays’ perspective, if you don’t have the required qualifications for a specific job, then you lost your spot for a more qualified person. This person probably spent most of his life working and studying without resting in the middle of it. Therefore, all this pressure to have the ultimate qualifications and requirements for a job generated a society of people that can not spare time for themselves or their beloved ones. They don’t have time to take a walk and enjoy the beautiful weather or the nice scenery. Eventually, they become so devoted to their career development that they forget about healing their mental and psychological health. With all this stress and lack of self-healing time, people are less happy and less satisfied than people were in the past.
In addition, the technological revolution contributed much to this quick change of the world. Accordingly, it verged on people’s happiness and satisfaction. To be particular, inducing new technology every day reflects on people who seek this new technology because they are not satisfied with the old one anymore. My own experience is an illustration of this concept, I got my son an iPhone for his birthday. At first, he was happy with his phone because it had all the features he aimed for. However, when the company released a new model. He wanted this new model that have way more features and specifications than the one he already got. So, he became less happy and less satisfied with his new phone and wished for a more advanced phone.
To sum up, People are less happy and satisfied than people were in the past because they became so materialistic and don’t know how to enjoy life anymore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75490196078 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73566305756 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0595494838 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.347826087 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338423844954 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100869973842 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112137180245 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241261913076 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399550417627 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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