Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Swift modification is one of the modern era’s characteristic and the effect of these transformation cannot be disregarded so that all humans on the earth feel the effects of it on their lives. While some people argues the effects of changing on the humans habitats, other mentions to big effects like depression that is provable due to the result of comparing rate between past and now. I am in favor of this idea that rate of happiness are reducing than past and the humans expectations are increasing base on three points
Firstly, companies’ politics leads the people to more consume and after industrial evolution they started to modify people's test. In fact, people faces with huge advertisements and diversity products. Providing all of the alluring merits needs plenty money so people spend more time to work that it can be somewhat satisfying and meet some of the needs. Of course, working out of standard time leads people to loss happiness.
Secondly, researches confirms an issue that the family and friendly relationship can be enough to diminish the stress. Family members as so near persons who can understand the personality problems and confident create a good chance to share the difficulties and speaking has undeniable effect to cut stress. In contrast, in the past family had a significant role in the people’ life and it is transparent why people in the past were more happiness. But the limitations like work hours don’t let to spend more times with family. Consequently, after a while negative effects like decreased life satisfaction and depression and sadness will be emerge.
Finally, in the technology era there may be less people who wasn’t familiar with net. With developing net new applications presented on society like social network. Base on the developers’ opinion the principal of producing this kind of application was making people near to each other. Unfortunately, researches shows that low rate of happiness and life satisfaction are common among social network users. In the other words, these kind of applications make users compare their real life with others virtual life. As a result, the users especially youth will be effected by showed virtual life that cause some serious mental problem like depression.
As a conclusion, I agree with the statement which mentions to decreasing the amount of people’s happiness in comparison with past base on three points like to be diversified, to reduce the family and friendly relationship plus to use social networks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, in fact, kind of, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23716381418 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99615070988 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542787286064 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2744453921 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217916794486 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702146766142 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573264271863 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130283984212 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394649268883 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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