Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Satisfaction and happiness is necessary to bring the life meaningful and blissful. Personally, I feel that people in the past is less happier because of the hardship in their life, health threat and confined right. In the subsequent paragraph, I will cogently present my reasons with an explaination to prove my stand.
First of all, technology makes the life of people in this time an easy to live. In contast to the previous time, they need not to complete their a simple daily work by applying a great effort and taking a colossal time to complete it. For instance, in the past, there were no better transportation system. To carry a 50 kg weight and transport within 50 km distance took almost a day. However, on development of the road way transport, a fast track and an airways, a thousand kilos of weight can delivered within a day even in the opposite of the world's globe. A life of the painstaking lifestyle shunned them to live the quality life as does by the today's people.
Secondly, freedom is essential for the people to live a life with satisfaction and in the past, people shackeled with the immoral rule and regulation. They had to pay the homage to the tyranical government all the time and had to live with the fear with out exercising their right. However, in the present, democracy pervade in the world providing people a freedom to enjoy their life. Had been not granted freedom in this time, people had to suffer by the unethical rules of the government.
Lastly, in the present days, a revolution of medical technology ensure safety to the life of people. They are able to be cured even infected by the chronic disease like cancer,hepatitis, etc. Though a risk of rising disease, due to development of the medical advancement, there is availability of the quick cure of the disease. However, there is harsh health related issue in the past. They had to suffer from the every hit of the new disease even though how less fatal was it. For instance, in eightenth century, many people had lost their life because a common cold had made sick the people the first time in the history. At that time, the medical condition was fragile and took long time to figure out the cure. By the time of cure, myriad of people lost their life.
In conclusion, a present people rejoice their life as compared to the past. This is because of rapid technological development, a better health facility and full of freedom.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less happy'?
Suggestion: less happy
...ally, I feel that people in the past is less happier because of the hardship in their life, ...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'complete'?
Suggestion: complete
...ast to the previous time, they need not to complete their a simple daily work by applying a...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...revious time, they need not to complete their a simple daily work by applying a great...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an airway' or simply 'airways'?
Suggestion: an airway; airways
...he road way transport, a fast track and an airways, a thousand kilos of weight can deliver...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ithin a day even in the opposite of the worlds globe. A life of the painstaking lifest...
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Line 6, column 250, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
... the time and had to live with the fear with out exercising their right. However, in the...
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Line 6, column 356, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...y pervade in the world providing people a freedom to enjoy their life. Had been not grant...
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Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hepatitis
...ected by the chronic disease like cancer,hepatitis, etc. Though a risk of rising disease, ...
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Line 8, column 772, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cure, myriad of people lost their life. In conclusion, a present people rejoice ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70960187354 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67820482256 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484777517564 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5014927483 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4347826087 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209807190093 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638988648901 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600779626677 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131181597414 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532548478652 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.