Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Being creative, rather than planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem.
There are many situations in all people's lives that they need to find the best solution of their problems. Human beings are always looking for the most important characteristic of people by which they are able to deal with their problems. Even though some people are in the opinion that organized person, the people can plan everything carefully, are more able to come up with their problems; but, I, personally, subscribe to this idea that creativity is the most useful and important characteristic which helps people to fine the best solution in their different lives' situations. They have a specific privilege by which can see the world in different ways. It is not to mention that the creative people are able to link various parts of life properly and reasonably.
In first place, in modern days, the kind of individuals' problem is changing in a galloping rate. People are always encountering with something new for which the previous solutions cannot be useful. By having this in mind, we can see the importance of creativity to cope with difficulties and dilemmas. Creative individuals have a specific blessing by which they can find the best solution as soon as possible, before being late. It is crystal clear that the organized individuals can cope with their trivial troubles, but not in the tough time with the more important issues. For instance, my brother and my sister are creative and organized person respectively. Some years ago, they used to establish an enterprise cooperatively. They had a good business and in the middle of their activities, many problems happened by both of them are able to come up with all of them. After a while the economic condition of our country became unpredictable and the most enterprises including their company bankrupted. They meet a lot of difficulties all of which need some distinct solution. Some of their problem were backfiring of their business, having a lot of unpaid debts, looking for the new job and so on. Even though my sister was always planning about everything but in this new condition she couldn’t handle her life and got depression. My brother, in the contrast, used of his creativity to see all of those issues in different ways and find the best solution for such a problem. He started to find the reason of the economic problem of our country and look for some big company which weren’t affected by this condition. He got help from them to continue his business but in the different way. Soon after that, his business thrived again.
Second, all of us will be in difficulties that it isn’t very important by appear in complexity, I mean they connect with a lot of parameters to consideration. Another ability of creative individuals is making a link among different effective constants. For instance, when a person got married meet a lot such a situation. Couples sometimes have problems that can't understand each other's behaviors many of which are rooted in varied reasons like their previous relationship, their memories of their parents' behaviors, their society's condition in which grew up, to mention but a few. Dealing with such a situation, no matter how much a person is planned, oppositely, the creativity bring people a lot of opportunities to get rid of such problems. They are able to link and see all the influential parameters to solve the misunderstanding, and misconception made between them and their spouses.
In summary, by taking all of these into account, I think being creative help people more to deal with their problem and find the best solution in comparison to the people who can plan carefully. Creativeness gives individuals good chance to see everything in vary ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 365, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n. Couples sometimes have problems that cant understand each others behaviors many o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, i mean, i think, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 99.0 52.1666666667 190% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3087.0 1977.66487455 156% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99514563107 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89183204519 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435275080906 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 955.8 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7419341169 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.448275862 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3103448276 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13793103448 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211842131912 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060732925393 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732804348339 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169689632418 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610649875125 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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