Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The traveling industry has become one of the biggest and also the most lucrative business in the world. Each year several people travel around the world for different reasons. Some people travel to a new destination, some people visit their family members or sometimes people travel to attend a festival like movie festivals or match like WorldCup or Olympic games. So like different destinations and different reasons for traveling, people choose different styles for traveling. Some people prefer to travel by tour including a tour guide and hotels and transportation. On the other hand, some people prefer the adventurous type of traveling, maybe alone or with a friend and without booking a hotel, just camping in nature or spend in the local people house. personally, I think the best way to travel is without a group and with no tour guide.
I will express my reasons in the following paragraphs:
First of all, I've experienced traveling in a group led by a tour guide. Based on my experience traveling with a group of people that you don't know can be annoying. In a tour group, there will be people of different ages and, different nationality with various bad habits that exploring new places may face lots of trouble. For instance, the tour guide asks all the group members to gather in front of the mall at a specific time, but there will be lots of wasted time for all people to gather. Some people don't pay attention that there are people who are waiting for them.
Second, when you travel with a group, the tour guide will plan your schedule during travel. So if you want to visit particular places at a special time it's not possible.
Besides, most of the time the tour agencies charged the travelers much more than the real prices. So for instance, if you book a hotel on your own it will cost you much cheaper. So by traveling alone you can decrease your expenses.
To sum up, I prefer to travel by myself to have my own experience and independence and spend time with people I choose not those who enroll in the same tour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, i think, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6703601108 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50177920283 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493074792244 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2457255548 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245840839313 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983713506154 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805542724823 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142316779641 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476647392759 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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