Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the most delightful feelings is being gusted in the house of grandparents. The culture which I come from, grandparents consider as a gift from God which we have to be thankful for them and as long as they are alive we should take care of them. These days, we drown in the hustle and bustle of the city life, sometimes we don't have enough time for our personal works. Unfortunately, despite the importance of family in my culture, these days the extended family especially the cousins, aunts are not our priority in comparison with the past. In the following statements, I will extend my points of view:
First, in comparison with the past, these days the transportation is easier and faster than before. Most of the families, at least have one or two cars. The public transportation system is beyond great(subways, buses, taxies, rubber,...). But despite all these ease, we don't have time for family gatherings.
Second, with the advent of social networks, communication tools we are aware of our friend's and family's life. For instance, what they do today, are they traveling, what kind of lunch do they have and... So we don't miss them like before. On the other hand, we are so involved with our work, education, and promotion that hardly find spare time for family. Our priorities have changed during the time passed. If we have spare time, we prefer to experience an adventure.
Last but not least, we can't ignore the role of money and financial crisis in our nowadays life. Unemployment, inflation and high prices don't let people have parties or gatherings.
In conclusion, in light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the extended family is less important and not our priority these days despite the fact that so many things such as transportation, communication are easier than before but we can't find enough time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ber,.... But despite all these ease, we dont have time for family gatherings. Seco...
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Suggestion: don't
...kind of lunch do they have and... So we dont miss them like before. On the other han...
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...e an adventure. Last but not least, we cant ignore the role of money and financial ...
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...Unemployment, inflation and high prices dont let people have parties or gatherings. ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...unication are easier than before but we cant find enough time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87301587302 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80174872506 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3559652917 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105859447209 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348068933591 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534681248842 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063013515791 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383154133335 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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