Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Considering the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide, I am strongly inclined to take the side of this statement particularly in entertainment trip. As far as I concern, regrading the importance advantages of the tour guide presence such as their useful experiences, their knowledge, their preemptive actions, etc, the tour guide can be implied as inseparable part of all travelings. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, tour guides have sufficient and enormous information about the destiny such as route, the interesting places for visiting and the culture. They categorically know which places is worth watching. Thus, the visitors should not pay money for the typical and boring places. Moreover, tour guides identify the best hotels for accommodation.
Aside from the point I made above, being one of the most proliferated topic in all trips, the time management plays a crucial role in the quality of traveling. It is crystal clear that there is a causal relationship between the alacrity of traveling on the one hand and the sufficient time to visit all favorite places on the other hand. Needless to say, the tour guide have enough experiences to estimate the appropriate time for all parts of the travelling such as visiting monuments, shopping souvenirs, rest, etc.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the suitable decisions in the critical conditions. For instance, if something bad happens to the visitors that might threaten the health of them, the tour guide absolutely is familiar with prefect solution for preventing harmful effects. It is also worth nothing that the tour guide should have thorough knowledge and experiences consisting all necessary aspects of the traveling and on contrary the presence of amateur tour guide cannot be indicated as an essential advantage.
Taking all these perspective into account, I highly put emphasis on the necessity of a tour guide in the journey regarding the fundamental advantages of their presence including sufficient knowledge, making decisive decisions and time management. Although, these subjects, to my best knowledge, are denoted as substantial advantages in the entertainment travelings, in work traveling the experienced guide can be implied as a perfect adviser.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33423180593 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00698228204 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5525606469 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.788672101 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157827014984 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566137935595 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631804959565 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904299583659 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732805879692 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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