Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Modern life has a lot of stresses, anxieties, depression, and pollutions. One of the best way For removing these problems is travelling. By travelling you can release the pressures and refresh your soul. Some people prefer to travel by tour guides because of some of their facilities, but I prefer to travel by myself because of two reasons.
First, travelling by tour guides can cost you a fortune. they usually ask you a lot of money for fancy foods, hotels, transportation, and tour guiding. However, when you travel alone, you can save money by eating simple foods, sleeping in a tent, and using public transportation. For example, I and my friend went to tripe to a city in north of Iran called Rasht, where there are too many breathtaking landscapes and beaches. We selected a few places to visit before travel, and We also used to prepare our food the night before next day travel, which was vegetables and easy to eat. And on day of travel we used buses or taxies to go to destinations. As a result, we visited a lot of places without expending too much money. In sum, travelling by youself can save you a lot of money.
Second, by travelling alone you can go to a lot of new places. The tour guides usaully bring people to a same places for many times, which are very famous among people because of their reputation in socail medium or the Interent. Furthermore, these palces are dirty and crowded, and you can not make connection with place. On the other hand, new paces are usually very calm and quiet, and always there is excitement for visiting them which lead to more fun and happiness. Although, there is a chance of losting in a new place, the Internet and GPS have solved this problem. For example, when I was travelling in Rasht, I tried to go to deeppest part of joungles where I could feel nature. In these regions, I lost a lot of times, but I found my way by using GPS. So, travelling by yourself propose opportunity of seeing new places.
All and all, I prefer to travel without a tour guide because I can save money and see new places. However, travelling with a tour guide can decrease tierdness of the travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5414507772 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60143490329 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8952683335 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6818181818 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204965903435 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714796797775 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563803646531 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146949493997 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290801804979 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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