Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on the fact that the group travelling and organization thereof has paramount significance in the people life; the group surfing is quite becoming trendy among travelers.
It is my empathetic belief that the most efficient and the best way is a tour guide journey; If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest that the lower cost of such travel and the easiest option to travel whereby a person can travel by herself or himself.
I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubts that in these days, the cost and expenditure of travelling alone is much higher than the group surfing; being a seemingly cheapest option to travel notwithstanding, the cost of such travel-individual traveler- is very high, and it is costly unfortunately; My personal experience is a compelling evidence for what I mean; I used to buy a ticket for flight to India about 100 dollar, so I would see the same ticket in charter flight was 80 dollar; not only the flight prize for a person was not cheap, but also the group surfing is much economical than travel by self.
It also goes without declaring that travel agencies provide places, tour facilities, and equipment in advanced; hence, the people do not worry and apprehension about providing travel material at all; the person make a payment earlier thereby comforting during travel time. To be more specific, when I was travelling in the South Asia, I found a travel agency to help me concerning all of areas tour, roads map, places name where I want to see, and the other materials that no one can provide by themselves.
It can be summed up in accentuating that the best way to surfing is in an organization led by a tour leader.
I think it is better to travel by means of these groups leader; they have great experience in travelling whereby people can travel more easily, and in efficient manner. Travel agency play a vital role in world-wide travel system. nonetheless, people would like to travel by themselves such a coach surfing and backpacking traveler recently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'seemingly the cheapest'.
Suggestion: seemingly the cheapest
... higher than the group surfing; being a seemingly cheapest option to travel notwithstanding, the c...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... a ticket for flight to India about 100 dollar, so I would see the same ticket in char...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...he same ticket in charter flight was 80 dollar; not only the flight prize for a person...
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Line 8, column 371, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to concern' or 'concern'.
Suggestion: to concern; concern
...sia, I found a travel agency to help me concerning all of areas tour, roads map, places na...
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Line 12, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...t is better to travel by means of these groups leader; they have great experience in t...
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Line 12, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nonetheless
...vital role in world-wide travel system. nonetheless, people would like to travel by themsel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nonetheless, so, as to, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83557951482 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83434427299 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533692722372 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.194748622 48.9658058833 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.4 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199860267298 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901358960915 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329206564819 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103232448277 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350557641842 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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