Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, due to the complexity of the world, all people are supposed to do a lot of tasks and most of them are under tension and pressure, which increase their stress level. The controversial question which arises here is whether, the best way to relive stress and relax for one is to spend his or her time alone. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that spending time with others like friends and family will be more helpful to reduce pur stress. T support this, there are several reason two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
Fiers and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that different people have different thinking caps, and they are interested in different fields. Spending time with other people provides a person with the opportunity to get familiar with different people. Each people can brings some intresting idea to do by which become able to relax and unwind, the person will have a wide variety of choices to spend his or her time and relives her stress. As an illustration, take my personal experience as acompelling example; last week, I decided to go to one of my friend's house and spend my leisure time with her and her friends. One of her friend was humor and proveked a convivial atmosphere in which all of us enjoyed from that and refreshed our mind. Had I spent my time solely, I would not have experienced that situation and I may stay stressful.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, pshycology speaking, socializing with other people is one of the most important way which help people to get relaxed. In some case of matter, spending time with other people give the chance to a person to speak about his or her emotions. Speaking with others not only will help a person to reduce the burdon of her shoulder and relaxe, but also it can be helpful for her to learn from others experiences in order to deal with her stress and unwind. For example, Last year, I was talking with my sister about my situation which is so stressful and need to relax, she told me about her approach in relaxing time in which she starts to speak with others and tries to eliminate stressful subject from her mind. After that, I am acting in this way and I enjoy the result. When I spent my relaxing time solely, there were a lot of pressure on me to handle them lonely, but now I can reduce them more successfuly.
In short, all the aforementione reasons lead us to the fact that there are a lot of different ways in oder to relax which are better that spending time alone. The fact that spending time with different people gives us a lot of choices to unwind, coupled with speaking with others can be helpful to reduce our stress, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... to get familiar with different people. Each people can brings some intresting idea ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53479125249 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45090443708 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443339960239 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9728053712 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.722222222 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9444444444 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215937675342 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868405500685 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050852662021 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17239828641 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03711366129 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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