Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children today would be happier if they had fewer possessions. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Childhood is the age when a person is most curious and want to know about everything and learn everything.
Nowadays we see childeren glued to tv screen or laptop screen. A child spent 3-4 hours on these devices almost everyday. This can effect his eyesight. Childrens get so used to these devices or possesions that they feel vulnerable, frustated when they do not have access to these devices. For example, even in my family, my sister's son does not sleep or eat without watching video on television or laptop. And this has become universal we can see it in every other family.
If a child has possions of lot of video games and video, he may get addicted to it. Lot of child in US are addicted to it. Even many adults are addicted to video games, parents have to see how much time and money their kids spent on video game.
Moreover, if a children remain playing with toys all day, he may become reserved. He might have difficulty making friends as he is involved in his possessions all th time. It is common in Usa that many kids remain glued to tv's, laptops rather than playing in field. Earlier children use to play in grounds when there was not much options available. But it is becoming less and less which can effect on their physical health.
Additionaly, if a children has lot of possessions he remains infatuated by those possessions. For example, if a children have lot of toys, he may remain busy playing with those toys whole day rather than spending time playing with friends in field. If children has less toys, He normally spent more time talking with parents about things as he is curious .about world, that helps kids understands different things. Spending time with kids, talking with them is much more important than buying toys. This will also help in better relationship between child and parent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...spent 3-4 hours on these devices almost everyday. This can effect his eyesight. Children...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ids spent on video game. Moreover, if a children remain playing with toys all day, he ma...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...than playing in field. Earlier children use to play in grounds when there was not m...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e to play in grounds when there was not much options available. But it is becoming l...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...heir physical health. Additionaly, if a children has lot of possessions he remains infat...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...d by those possessions. For example, if a children have lot of toys, he may remain busy pl...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun toys is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... with friends in field. If children has less toys, He normally spent more time talki...
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Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th parents about things as he is curious .about world, that helps kids understands...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6801242236 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42395432499 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3326011249 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.35 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837715646407 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253846829098 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375614574369 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390624979853 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033926832939 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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