Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The competition between friends always has a negative effect.
Friendship, as we all know, is our wealth. Although it may seem exaggerated, at first sight, noticing the world is ruled now, one may find this contention sensible. There are many debates among critics about competition and friendship, which should be considered as soon as possible. In this regard, many people are inclined toward this opinion that competition between friends always has a negative effect. As far as I am concerned, despite all drawbacks which are attributed to the competition, the advantages of competition among friends overweight it`s disadvantageous.
The first reason which makes me hold this belief is the constructive side of competition. Although competition brings a negative perception in mind as a whole, consent between friends can be inferred as a positive challenge. Actually, from this aspect competition plays a crucial role in even constructing a friendship, to deepen it and better understanding. In an examination which had conducted in this area, I have read an article about recently, results show that people who meet each other in a challenging situation like competition make better and deeper friendship, also it indicated that competition among friends enable them to know each other better and cut off the relationships between previous friends who feel themselves in the same competition, just happen at the first level of competition.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is helping. For the majority of people, friendship is considered as the biggest achievement of life, so there are many people are going to sacrifice everything for their friendship. As it seems friendship is a dominant factor and others are subsidiary. Although many critics debate that competitions destroy all positive aspects of friendship and transform it into a battle scene, it shouldn’t be forgotten that friendship has superiority rather than other factors and can control them, somehow. In fact, the aspect of friendship prevents people to be so tough about their competition. Besides, they will be helpful wherever and whenever they can. Whereas competition may intensify the conditions, the friendship will balance everything and prepare the situation in which friends help each other as mu as possible.
To summarize, all contemplating remarks we safely concluded that constructive side of friendship which makes a relationship deeper and better understanding should never be neglected. Moreover, although the nature of competition brings negative feelings in mind, the power of friendship not only balances it but also provide a basis in which friends help each other as much as they can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46601941748 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12755786542 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509708737864 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.4103300391 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.111111111 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135313279114 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485398047804 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702131680122 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967600561752 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493376680952 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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