Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage other countries. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
I would agree with the statement that countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage with other countries. In my believe, there are some times when a country needs support from other countries, and if they do not have good relations then it might occur some difficulties. There can be many reasons why a country needs other countries help, for example, maybe they are facing difficulties due to an extreme natural cause or are back lashing with some other country and needs help. Or maybe, some needs economic support for the better future of their countries.
Firstly, countries facing major problems due to natural causes. Nature is unpredictable, it can be sometimes a blessing for people or can be a curse for them. There are many countries in the world which are facing problems like drought, floods, or volcanic eruptions. And at some point or the other, they need the help of other countries. It is important for them to maintain good relations with other countries, or else there can be a time when they cannot look up to someone for their help. Moreover, there are many countries who wants to help, but sometimes their bad relations with each other becomes a reason of why they couldn't. For example, in today's world, Africa faces several droughts, and it is their relations with other countries like USA, Russia and China, which help many African countries to cover up the losses and start living a normal life again.
Secondly, countries facing backlash. After witnessing World War One and Two, many countries who do not have keep up healthy relations with each other and are at the stages of conflict, try to avoid the situation of war as much as possible. But sometimes, some countries get involved in violent conflicts like terror attacks or bomb blasting, causing deaths of hundreds, sometimes thousands. To avoid such activities, it is important that countries should maintain healthy relations around the world. For instance, attack in New York on 9/11, attack on Taj Hotel in Mumbai or the attack on Army School in Peshawar. Whenever countries like America, India, New Zealand or Pakistan faced such hazardous attacks, they received help from their neighboring countries because of their healthy relations.
Another reason for why countries should not isolate themselves from the world is because there are some difficult times in the economy of a country where they need to ask for help from others, as it becomes difficult for them to cope up by themselves. A recent example to such situation is the economy of Pakistan, which is facing major backlash in its economy, and it is their good relations with China only, which is why the country is surviving. China is helping Pakistan by providing money, food, and other trading options to overcome the situation. If Pakistan wouldn't have maintained good relations with China for years, there might be no possibility that China would be helping them.
Hence, these were the few from the many reasons why I believe that a country should not isolate itself from the world and should engage with other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2601.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99232245681 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50775962809 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42802303263 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.907058963 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.227272727 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6818181818 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295486729929 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111301571559 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125386348857 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223363053127 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107094018524 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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