Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Before making a decision, it is important to find out if the decision will be popular with others. Use examples and reasons to support your position.
At every point of life, we have to take decisions, some of which are easy as we are confident about them while some are difficult. In my opinion, before making a decision, it is not important to find out if the decision will be popular with others for two reasons. In my belief, decisions should be taken according to one's convenience and need, and while deciding something, people should put their choices before anything else.
Firstly, people should take decisions according to their convenience. There are times when people get distracted because of their surroundings and end up taking some decisions which they didn't want to. Rather, people should surely look up in their surroundings for some directions but at the end should do what makes them feel confident and is in their convenience. For example, when I was in college, we had some objective subjects. In option we had Machine Learning and Cyber Security, and almost all of my friends were opting Machine Learning, which I didn't know about at the time. I wanted to build up my career in computer security and at that time if I'd known about my friend's decisions maybe I might have had changed my choice and might study a different subject, but then it would have become difficult for me to achieve my desired career choice.
Secondly, while taking decisions people should keep themselves above anyone's choices because at the end of the day, they have to deal with whatever is left with them. For instance, in college, if I would have taken Machine Learning instead of Cyber Security, though a great field, today I might not be a cloud security engineer. So, for achieving a goal it is important to take right decisions, instead of deciding something under peer pressure or finding out the most popular decision among others. Also, it is not important that whatever we decide, it always has to be right. There are many times when we make mistakes or go for the wrong choices but we get to learn so much from those wrong decisions too. For example, when I was in high school, I decided to study the advance level science while all of my friends were studying the basic level, which I was aware of. At the end of the semester, I didn't score well but I did get to perform many different chemistry experiments which my friends didn't do.
Concluding my point, it is not important that you will always get a positive result from your decisions or if a large number of people are taking a common decision then it will be correct for you. It is a person's responsibility to think for themselves and taking decision which benefits them before anyone else. Also, there are some times when people have to make decisions according to their society or due to some situations and it looks like what everyone is deciding is correct and should agree with them. There is no harm in finding out if one's decision is popular among others and if so, agreeing on that. People should listen to their instincts and experience while making decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2475.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49809069949 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434285714286 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4873416717 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194430236465 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735378939239 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910207862349 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157594562212 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824065985413 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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