Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Lives in rural area and in a big city is much more different in many ways. Both the places have their pros and cons. While there is more pollution in a big city, there are less chances of personality development in a rural area. I would prefer to live in a big city because of the opportunities which aren't available in a rural area and because of the available facilities and the availability of advanced technology in a city.
Starting from the first point, rural area is known for its peaceful environment, less pollution, and less rush which is missing in a big city. People are always busy and are always running for something in a big city, but living there can also be beneficial because of the opportunities present. For example, there are many options for well-paid jobs, which are not there in a rural area. No matter if you are well educated with a professional degree or just high school passed, or never went to school, a big city always has numerous job opportunities for everyone. Moreover, there are chances of getting a part time job very easily in a big city as compared to rural area.
For example, my cousin who used to live in a rural area, but shifted to a big city for acquiring her further studies and to get a professional job. She has grown up in rural area and has always lived in a peaceful environment and was never used to all the rush and the busy lifestyle of a big city. But now, after living for more than four years in Manhattan, she tells me how much personality development she seen in herself.
Secondly, there are many facilities available in a big city. Take any activity like schools, colleges, jobs, or any fun activities, there are various options available in a city, which we cannot find in rural area. Moreover, people living in a big city enjoy great comfort of the technology available, for example, availability of cabs or ordering food from mobile apps, which is not there in rural area. Also, there are many places which uses technological equipment for fun activities like virtual reality theaters, technical parks, 7-D theaters are present in big cities, which gives a unique experience.
For instance, I grew up in a big city with all of the facilities available to me, like ordering food anytime or going out with my friends any time without any inconvenience. And last summer I visited my grandmother, who lives in rural area, for a week. Of course, I enjoyed the less polluted-peaceful environment there, but after three to four days, I started missing my busy schedules because of less activities present there. I found the life interesting for first two to three days because it was all new to me and have never lived in such surroundings, but after a while, it was difficult for me to stay at one place without anything to do, or visit any place.
Hence, I'd prefer to live in the convenience of a big city rather than a rural area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nality development she seen in herself. Secondly, there are many facilities avai...
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...ities, which gives a unique experience. For instance, I grew up in a big city wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64216634429 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72519228714 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42746615087 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0355796037 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.619047619 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209732020046 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792336425911 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552022145665 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141614058001 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618717314773 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.