Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Education is much important for every individual's life. Some people encounter much strenuousness regarding their children's education, because of social media which is much more available for today's generation kids when their parents are working. In my point of view, educating kids is not a difficult task as concerned. There are several reasons for me to choose this option, those can be explored in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, childrens are capturing and learning the positive effects on social media apart from squandering their time. For instance, I have a nephew. He was always watching American football on youtube and was making points of their mistakes in a book. Then we thought he was misusing the time on social media, though he was making notes for success. Later, after some years he was a successful American football player, by following those steps he made from his childhood by watching the youtube videos. Likewise, we can see how advantageous social media can be for young children to be triumphant in their chosen field.
Secondly, for parents especially for those who are busy with their work, they can hire an online tutor. To make their children educated being at home on holidays and bring their interests out of their mind. This kind of mentoring is very essential for the young developing kids. For example, I have a friend who's parents are always busy. She was joined in various arts and culinary courses by their parents during her summer vacation. Over time, she was much more interested in culinary and arts. Now she became a good pastry chef in the most reputed restaurant in New york city. We can see with this example that, social media is helpful to bring out their interest and make it happen.
All in all, with all the reasons into account, I vehemently assert that social media is advantageous to young children nowadays than it was in the past. Not only kids are learning the positive side of social media but also the interests which inculcated in their minds have been bought out and developed towards their success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
Education is much important for every individuals life. Some people encounter much strenu...
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Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...l reasons for me to choose this option, those can be explored in the subsequent paragraph...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ildren to be triumphant in their chosen field. Secondly, for parents especially fo...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...ping kids. For example, I have a friend whos parents are always busy. She was joined...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93732193732 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50804178951 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552706552707 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7610362038 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.65 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16866704918 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555337567602 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469749221383 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112622991962 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024603952843 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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