Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children has become more difficult task because now children spend more time on cell phone, online games and social web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We are now live in a modern era and here, education is an integral part of our life. We get to know everything through various social media. People are having a hard time reaching on a consensus whether children spend more time on mobile phones and it leads them to go astray. As far as, I am concerned, I firmly believe that children are now in a danger zone due to the overuse of mobile phones. There are several reasons to support my point and I will explore it in the following essay.
First of all, children are now think that cell phone is a daily part of their life. For one thing, they stay most of the time with cell phone except school time. Though there are some advantages to communicate, it is true that some harmful radiation is emitting from here and children are vulnerable of it. Overusing leads to cause vomiting, headache, and feel fish out of water. They cannot take proper sleep.
Secondly, the number of playgrounds is on a waning day by day. As a result, children have become more addicted to online games. Online games sometimes give refresh and keep them away from bad company. But, whenever it is a part of their daily activities, they learn much sharp practice such as violent acts from there. It is obvious that one day they will do the same thing whatever they learn from the online games in practical life.
Moreover, social media plays a negative role in their mind. They become trap any illegal relation at the early stage, for instance, my cousin who was 12 years old. He dropped from school as he could not hold his concentration. He has an affair with someone. So everything went out of his control.
Given the factors above, we may reach that children are getting day by day toward ruin by running out prodigious time in the cell phone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, for one thing, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5248447205 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33823709781 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5926646782 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.380952381 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09523809524 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237328470888 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606760665049 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622683372822 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12034202655 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056122608257 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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