Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A good leader should spend more time listening to other people's ideas than taking his or her own ideas.
Since the dawn of humanity, leaders and ruling classes have exerted an influence on people’ s life, and with the passage of time, democracy have been emerged. In effort to make better decisions, leaders have implemented several procedures. One of the determining factor in leadership is the necessity of consulting and obtaining people’s opinion. In this regard, choosing the best strategy to follow has caused a heated debate in societies in many centuries. By brief reviewing history, we can discover that some leaders have found it useful to hear people’s opinion. While others believe otherwise. The idea to which I subscribe is that rulers should take their people’s feedback. My reasoning is based on quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, sometimes leaders encounter situations in which they should decide important decisions in careful fashion. Indeed, these conditions, unlike other trivial matters, making poor decisions has serious consequences. For instance, leaders should opt for the decent strategy in dealing with foreign affairs. Otherwise, their decisions lead to crisis. Accordingly, far-sighted leaders do not take consulting with experts and people for granted. Conversely, if leaders do not pay attention to other’s opinions and decide hastily, it is highly probable to lost and their efforts become fruitless. Statistics demonstrate that democratic countries have developed in a galloping rate in comparison with other ones.
Secondly, democratic manners followed by leaders raise their popularity and strengthen their positions. In fact dictatorship and force cannot results in leaders’ stabilities. Rather, it is democracy and their popularity that guarantee their victories in elections. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that democracy is open sesame to most of countries’ problem, which causes that the absolute majority become dominant. In fact, Gandhi is the most famous epitome who brought democracy and independence to India. Hence, leaders all around the world should follow Gandhi other well-known leaders’ way if they want to have a decent reputation in history.
Eventually, by acquiring other’s ideas, leaders will have better emotion. In fact, they will not have any stress because they have examined and considered any side effect of their decisions. Furthermore, they will be sure that there will be no dissatisfaction and revolutions since people have been involved in decision making. Having positive feelings, leaders can have better performance, which leads to development of country.
To sum up, I have a penchant for the idea that leaders should hear to their people because of aforementioned reasons. Therefore, it is highly recommended that leaders grant their unqualified support to democratic manners in which people’s viewpoints can be obtained, which can pave the way to developed and mature society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2554.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71364653244 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10743972644 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552572706935 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2341872233 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5925925926 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48148148148 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226804226794 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705250106979 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552506130998 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13737797993 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503931066204 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 86.8835125448 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.