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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Government should make preschool education free of charge.

Nowadays, education has become the top concern of modern citizens, recently, there is a heated debate on whether the government should provide free preschool education, some claim that it is a waste of money to do that. As for me, I believe that the authority should make preschool education free.

Firstly, the government provides free preschool education contributes to a stable social environment. To be specific, with free preschool education, plenty of mundane families can highly cut their costs in one aspect, as a result, the money they saved can be used better on some emergencies or (for) their children’s further education. This policy releases the pressure on raising the family all by themselves alone which might lead to bad mental health or even worst, a broken of the family. Take my sister Lucy for example, her father raises her alone, in order to give her a good study environment, since education is the best way for normal people to go upward. He has to do a perilous job as a builder, however, once in an accident, he fell fallen down from the building, making him lose lost his arm. The family’s situation even went worse. So, if the government could make preschool free, lots of families have less financial pressure, preventing some tragedies happen, and leading to a happier society.

In addition, free preschool education is beneficial to their future education. This is because, early childhood education, like working with others, learning some simple words, and basic math, will be more likely to result in positive outcomes in their later life, laying the groundwork for elementary school or even the entire studying experience. Let us come back to the example above. In that kindergarten, teachers always arranged for us to form a group and do things like building blocks in different shapes and colors. Through this program, we were encouraged to speak aloud with loud counts, aiming to win unique flowers and rewards from teachers. With a joyful playing experience, I built a solid foundation in basic mathematics, which equipped me with sufficient knowledge to adapt to courses in primary school. See, decent childcare indeed gears kids up for the long study journey, which means the government should shoulder the responsibility of improving every little citizen an equal chance to flourish.

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, I still maintain that the government should make preschool education free.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15461346633 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74077658147 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633416458853 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.638027518 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.588235294 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278695277191 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971799200818 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945359789112 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218366440682 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764974775523 0.0645574589148 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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